Dear Ryan,
My name is Lucy Western.I'm a 13 year old and I live in London.I kinda like your project but it could be better.My cousin and I write ideas so you can make it better.You really did a great job drawing those landscapes.
I'm writing this only to tell you how you can improve it.But you can add a picture of you and your dog just to make it look more appealing.Thank you.
Best regards,
Lucy Western.
Address:
27 Old Gloucester Street
London
WC1N3AX
Date and time:
3rd December
The destination:
Ryan
10 Dowing Street
London
BH1 1AA
Draga Ryan,
Ma numesc Lucy Western.Am 13 ani si traiesc in Londra.Intr-un fel imi place proiectul dar putea sa fie mai bine.Eu si verisorul meu iti scriem idei ca sa-l faci mai bine.Ai facut o treaba foarte bune desenand acele privelisti.
Iti scriu asta numai sa-ti spun cum sa-l faci mai bun.Poti sa adaugi o poza cu tine si cainele tau ca sa-l faci mai atragator.Cu placere.
Toate cele bune,
Lucy Western
Adresa:
27 Old Gloucester Street
London
WC1N3Ax
Data:
3 Decembrie
Destinatia:
Ryan
10 Dowing Street
London
BH1 1AA
